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Artist's Comments

Fabulous Bjoern. He was here briefly in Australia after seeing China, Asia, etc. He's now back in Europa.

Critiques


:icontimmydoomsqueaks:
Stating the obvious, this is a gorgeous black and white shot that makes excellent use of the environment and what I presume to be natural lighting. Despite my natural inclination to dislike portraits wherein the figure is placed dead center, I find myself enjoying this one.

There is a good relationship between the negative space (and the texture) and the figure that helps to create a strong impression. The figure seems bold, sturdy, much like his environment. There is some good metaphorical play between his rock-hard abs and the stone on which he stands.

The only thing that I take issue with in this composition is the fact that the model is wearing underwear. I think that it contrasts too sharply with the natural feel of the rest of the picture, and I think he would have benefited from being entirely in the nude.

Then again, maybe he's not meant to be entirely one with his surroundings. There is also the model's comfort level to consider - perhaps he didn't want to be in the nude. I'm only speaking from an outsider's perspective. Regardless, I enjoy this piece, and it was a :+fav: well-earned.

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:iconrojpix:
excellent POV..enhances the strength of the sitter

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Roj
:iconkumimonster:
fashion portrait?
:p
hehehe

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kumi
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:icondougfdoug:
Bjoern lives over your way now too - well, Europe in your visits ....
:icondougfdoug:
Cheers! Yep Bjoern is kinda strong too.
:icondavidlawrence:
Hey Doug....are you getting into doing a men's series too? Killer image my friend.... Have you seen the images from my first men's rope project shoot?

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:icondougfdoug:
Cheers Dave, and long time 'no see'! I've worked with a few male models, and it's a lot harder I think .... mebbee an 'affinity' thing, I don't know, I try to get 'it' right though. I just visited your folio after your message, and yep, you are the man. Brilliant work, such clarity.
:iconjoshuaseven:
terrific perspective - great shot :)

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Joshua Seven
Artistic Nude Model
Alone or Accompanied, Indoors, Outdoors, and in Your Studio
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:icondougfdoug:
Thanks Josh, much appreciated.

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Mar 15, 2009, 10:28:13 AM

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