Turn of the Screw

I really like the concept of this one. Bendy is good! Love the red hair strewn about and the range of tones. I love extreme lighting so I find your use here very appealing. The curve of her body with the shadows giving plenty of definition to her fine form. Wonderful.

For suggestions, I'm not sure I like the large white area of the sheet. Perhaps a little tighter cropping or slightly different camera position? I also find the light on the comforter or pillow to the far right distracting. Perhaps it can be burned down a bunch?

Finally, I don't like the light on her right ankle. It pulls my eye away from that wonderful curve of her body. I guess I'd like the whole area in much deeper shadow, but its probably just my biases.

Overall, I really like this one.